No chapter draft looked more archaic in my rewriting pass than that of chapter 8. When I wrote it a year ago, India was on "everyone's watch list." It's come off those lists now.
At long last, a new chapter (.docx and .pdf). Each time I upload a chapter it feels like I am permanently lifting a weight off my shoulders with a mighty heave. This one took so long, I doubt it is worth the wait (or weight).
